man a critique has to have 100 words, here is a non-official one. You have the colors and composition good, just need some better flair. like more background or more people. Other than that it is beast. I have nothing else to say except for add more comics. also beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast beast (srry needed more words) O YEA XD